Man, you guys are ALMOST making me regret San Diego weather. (Almost!) It was bright and shiny the day I got my SR.
Personally I like the font you chose, and the look of the graphics overall. I really don't care for the color of my bike (I think because I got an early one, the color may not be the same as the later ones), so I may wait until I repaint it to do any graphics, but I'll look seriously at yours when/if I decide to do some graphics.
I really don't like the design of the tail end of the bike either, but my issue is that it's too sparse -- it looks like a dirt bike with such a big gap between the wheel and the fender. I think it would look better with the saddlebags, but I prefer the trunk for aerodynamics, so that's how I went. Honestly, the rack and trunk themselves look fine, but they may have even made the rear end look worse, kinda emphasizing the empty space under the fender. And if I lost the passenger pegs, I couldn't give my g/f rides any more. I'd never hear the end of that!